Received this feedback from instructor please rewrite with this in mind.
Please be aware of numerous logical fallacies, such as oversimplification and overgeneralizations. Be sure to address both sides of an issue. What about the people who have had allergic reactions, possible seizures, etc? Also, in the beginning you are talking about vaccines in general and then you apply that to one vaccine debate. Not all vaccines are the same and not all have had the same implications