diffusion of clean technology in the Afghanistan

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dissertation addresses the factors influencing thediffusion of clean technology in the Afghanistan, with a focus onrural areas. The key dependent variable is represented by variousmeasures of diffusion related to amount of energy generated, numberof users, and the extent to which an alternative energy source isdeemed usable and hence institutionalized. It argues that therehave been six key factors which have functioned as enablers orbarrier for the adoption and diffusion of clean technologies duringthe period from 2005-2021 in Afghanistan.