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Kohn, Alfie. “From degrading to de-grading—Alfie Kohn.” High School Magazine (1999).

Keep in mind that as a composition class, our focus on how well the author “composes” an article. 
Thus, we are not analyzing grades. We are analyzing an article that happens to be about grades. 
The thesis, topic sentences, and analysis need to address something from the article.  For instance, a thesis might address the author’s sources and organization. 
One body could address sources while the other the organization. 
I’m attaching a sample body to help illustrate the requirements for an analytical body.Template of Reaction Paragraph.docx